DisturbedDisorder

"I promise I won't ever break you." Kissing at lunch break. Open up to break down all secrets. Making love, don't wanna stop to take a break. Break our eye ...

So last year we had to write a poem about something we learned in social with a rhyming scheme of ABCB, and I chose to write mine about the Aztec. ...

You were strong through the years, Teaching me proper manners, And at people’s birthdays, You’d be the first to help hang the banners. There was not a heart in this ...

Hey there, ladypurple~ I saw that this is a re-write, but I haven't read how it was before, so I can't tell you how much you improved on it, but ...

Sorry for the delay on this chapter. I actually wrote it a while ago, but there was a family emergency and then a whole bunch of other stuff happened, but ...

This chapter isn't very exciting, but I plan on it all picking up very quickly, so don't run away on me :] I'm also sorry if there's spelling issues or ...

Hey there, This was sad ;[ Haha. i thought I'd just state the obvious there before I start the reply. Okay, I'll start now ^_^ I liked it. I'm not ...

Hi there, I really liked the basic outline of the story- a lie that you're trapped inside of and can't get out of. I love poems that stretch sayings or ...

Hey there, Okay, so I have to say I agree with the other two. The set up was a little off (paragraphs should not have so much space between them) ...

Hmm. I guess it wasn't really your kind of book. I really liked it, though. :/

So here it is. The beginning of the real part of the storyline. I think I rushed this part a bit since I don't have very much free time anymore, ...

Thanks for all the help, guys, but unfortunately I won't be able to do much with the story for a while because I recently got a job and it's been ...

Hi there, So this was really cute and nice, but to me it seemed more like a story than a poem. I don't know, that was just my personal opinion. ...

Hi there, Oh my goodness! This is so sad and I read through, hoping that we would find out whether he lives at the end, but you didn't say, so ...

Hey there, This was really short, and I guess it did the job, but maybe adding more would be even better. Like someone before me said, capitals are important and ...