DisturbedDisorder

So, this is the prologue of a story I thought of, and I was wondering if I should keep writing. It's short, and doesn't give away much about the story, ...

Hello~~ I'll comment as a I read in blue~~ Corrections in red~~ For thousands of years cultures, ancient and not, have been writing legends about mythical creatures; some legends were ...

Heeello there~~ First off, I'll start by saying that you need to give yourself more credit. You say that you are "such a bad poet," but this poem proved you ...

Suddenly, I’ve lost myself, Everything I knew is wrong, I feel like I’m falling, And clarity is what I long. My friends go and stab my back, Comfort moves away, ...

Hey there, Alfreto :] I guess I'll give my general feelings for each poem individually- Child, why cry? The first thing I noticed was grammar and spelling. It could be ...

Often I wonder, Why is “I love you” so hard to say? Why do we want to hide And keep all of our feelings locked away? When three simple words ...

Listen very closely, Listen to the sound, Listen to those machines, As they bang and puff and pound. Listen to the voices, Listen to them yell, Listen to them fight ...

This was for a school assignment. It's kind of short, but that's because it could only be a page, double spaced. Basically I have strong feelings about how bad human ...

Heyo~ I'm assuming this is for school, since you asked me to edit your free write, and this is all I found :] I agree with the last person- too ...

I know it isn't amazing, but I kind of like it. Do your worst. I dream of setting myself free, of ending this madness, All I can think about is ...

I'm not sure what to say. I followed the link, and although I never knew him, I joined. I'm sorry this isn't a real review of the poem. I just ...

The girl had been the happiest girl you could imagine. She had a loving family, and her own style. Everyday she woke up with a purpose, dreaming of the future ...

Hey there~ This was a beautiful poem, and other than I few parts, I thought it was really good. It's a very emotional poem, but sometimes emotional poems are the ...

I was ready to leave, Nothing was what I'd ever achieve. My reflection painful to look at, My thighs always a little too fat, My dark taste brought on countless ...

Wow, I don't have much to say. I hate to write an unhelpful response, but there isn't much bad to be said. I loved it. :]