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I think your main concern here is figuring out exactly why it wouldn't translate well to a reader. Do you mean that the situation is really improbable but it really ...

9/10. I like it! :D

Ooo. This was so cool. Like a dark, intense Toy Story. I really liked the way you incorporated the lulluby. The song's presence added another layer to the story (and, ...

Hey, dude. Do you know that I've never actually critiqued this? (Yes you do.) This piece frustrates me with its perfection and self-stability. I assessed it from a lot of ...

I'm such a sucker for things with these sorts of titles. Case File, Case Study, Evaluation...triggers my intrigue. :) To that end, I kind of like retaining "Case File #5" ...

Well, I only started yesterday. :) But I find them inspirational for novel writing. That massive, unfinished world, y'know.

Hi there, Ladymask and ReisePiecey (whose username reminds me of one of my favorite things-- Reese's Pieces)! Fancy seeing you here, Rachael. :D I pulled my username from one of ...

Thanks very much! And also: hello! And also: your avatar is fabulous! My friend be Rachael Elg...she's floating around here somewhere. All of my novels are fantasy. Usually urban, though ...

Hey there. :) I'm Sydney, a seventeen year old novel writer. My best friend sent me a message telling me to join this site pronto about an hour ago...and here ...