Young Writers Society

(I was alarmed when I realized that you had complimented my reviews without me actually having given you one. So here I am! :D ) I want to hug your ...

Hey there, Yuri. :) I should say that I very much liked the title of this. I was a little on the fence thematically once I'd finished, but then my ...

Gotta jump into this one, but where? Plot does not utilize the complex literary techniques and historical roots to which Character novels do. You can observe this in the inherent ...

She turns and smiles at me. We’ve been together for almost 7 months now and life has never been better. I don’t know what it is but I know that ...

Hi! I've been reviewing a little around here but I've never posted anything of my own before, so I figured it was time to put up or shut up. :) ...

Ugh. That was SO GOOD. So good that I want to put my final comments and suggestions before the nitpicking I did on some technical and general workings of the ...

This is lovely! My favorite part was definitely the voice. Usually parodies and satire get a little grating from the narrator's influence and/or references, but I thought you struck a ...

Really interesting. Kind of chilling, too! I'll admit it: I love dialogues. They almost always lead to very quick and concise character definition, and this one is no different. I ...

Look: Acre City’s littlest crime fighter was standing alone in the southernmost district of the Swats. He was watching himself on the television that was mounted on the side of ...

Whew, this makes me want to go back to my days of reading hardcore fantasy. With your style of prologue and then dark, strange character POV, as well as the ...

Aw. I love flash fiction for pieces exactly like this one: very clear snapshots of human life. The pace of this piece was perfect-- slow and smooth. You also managed ...

Okay, wow. I agree with this so much it's ridiculous. Especially the parts about not dating guys younger than you when you're younger and the puppy thing. It's just such ...

If you review for me, I'll be your best friend. :)

8/10 It's mesmerizing!

And this might not be the place, but I have to caution against Bird by Bird by Annie Lammott. A lot of published writers seem to trumpet it, but I ...