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Re: Why?
Oh my god, this is amazing. Seriously, I felt something while reading this. I didn't catch any errors. Wow.
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: My Aborted Child
My mother would be proud. :P I didn't notice any errors that weren't pointed out by anyone else. A very well written piece of work. I wanna hug Eliot. :(
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Re: Can I Forgive You?
I really liked it. :) Ah, 10 year old drama was nice. I feel bad for your main character though, her life sucks. I'm glad it's better towards the end ...
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Re: Maryann's Ethics
Hey, I love this. Not many people can pull of third person well, but I think you did a pretty good job of it. To leave no room for any ...
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Re: Burden To mourn
Thank you very much. :)
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Burden To mourn
I can hear footsteps creeping around the corner. The heavy sound of leather soled boots hitting hard concrete, sending my racing heart into overdrive. Closer. Closer. It's almost like being ...
Apr 4, 2011