DismantleRepair

Great! I enjoyed it (: I felt like I was getting to know you as a writer and not just seeing the piece as just another poem. You've got a ...

Truth and Happiness wait patiently, anchored just out of reach. But no one who has lived knows this path to be without common obstacle. Within sight and reality, who stands ...

Poetry is all about perspective, and this is a unique take I haven't ever seen! I loved when you described them coming and going (I.e. Glossy + fiery tint). The ...

Nice hook - entire piece had a lot of drama. I'm sure that you were aiming to inflict emotion, so good job in that sense! Don't get too caught up ...

At times it flowed nicely, but most of it felt like you were trying to cram/force lines together just to make the rhyme. However, the last stanza doesn't match the ...

You intense choice of words really hits the reader hard. This piece is absolutely beautiful. You definitely hit a source of inspiration when you wrote it. There wasn't anything I ...

This made me go awww and miss being a little girl. This piece clearly conveys the fears and confusion of growing older and independent, sometimes apart, from parents. I would ...

I like this, your (or the speaker's) emotion regarding the issue is very evident. The imagery of the first stanza is great! I wish you continued more of the captivating ...

Tall and taller, that's how I should stand. Act impenetrable, diminish any insecurity. My job is to remain on guard, be constantly prepared to protect the kingdom with my life. ...