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Re: Change One Letter
Duck
Mar 10, 2007 -
Re: The Secret I Could Never Tell
If the secret got out death would be apon us. I nkew the truth was deathening, "apon" should be "upon". "nkew" was probably just a typo, but it should be ...
Mar 10, 2007 -
Re: A silly work called Monsters Under My Bed
That was great! It made me laugh. I like how the poem shifts. It was amazing. Please write more! Ryan
Mar 10, 2007 -
Re: Untitled
I like how you used a lot of color, but it was confusing. I really don't understand what you mean. Maybe if you make it longer (not a haiku) it ...
Mar 10, 2007