Disenchanted

Yet, here again, I am. Begging upon my knees for critics to show and read my stories. xD This is perhaps another story I started but doesn't know whether to ...

Well, this is an unfinished product from my Creative Writing Class. I need some helpful tips and comments, and possibly new ideas for this story. So... critique away, please. C: ...

This was very well done. Interesting and mysterious, and that's why I love it! I love it when Death himself is the narrator and explaining his ways to guide others ...

Hehe, I'm trying some more poetry. I'm still a noob at it so don't bash on me too harshly. xD This is my second attempt at writing poetry, my first ...

This ties into my other story, 'Like a Phoenix, She Rises.' I don't know how exactly they'll wind together but we'll see. It's kind of short so I'll edit it ...

*waves* Hi~ C: Just wanted to say, before I review this poem, I got goosebumps while reading it. xD Now off we go! One wings of white feathers agleam, is ...

Hey there! C: Just wanted to say that this piece was very... interesting. It kind of confused me at times though. Was this 'you' breaking up with the narrator or ...

I have to say, you have an incredible talent for photography! The lighting is fabulous but in the third picture, the kitten's fur seemed a little too sharp and I ...

I kind of wrote this when I was going through some of my darker days. It's not very good and really short because I suck at poetry, but it means ...

This is a little tidbit from the story I plan to write in my Creative Writing class. I don't really know where I'm going with this yet, but I have ...

I chose Song number 3; Marry You by Bruno Mars. Ring. Ring. My hand shot out in a flurry of motion, knocking the persistent cellphone off the mahogany bedside table ...

Can I just say? That your vocabulary is stunning! You used different variations/synonyms of words and used them effectively in the poem! To be honest, I had to grab a ...

Wow, this deep. I honestly have nothing to critique with this piece. It seems very well thought out and intriguing. It's the kind of poem that makes you wonder who ...

I like it. Very unique and creative. The only thing that bugged me a little bit- but not a lot, was the repetitive 'I's. But other than that, I really ...

This was excellent! Great job! The only thing I want to point out is that the rhythm and beat of the lyrics go along smoothly except for the second stanza. ...