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Re: Three Companions Chapter One
Heya Amniel! this is very good warhammer story, i usealy read pretty slow but this one was very interesting so i read it faster than usual, I'd wouldn't bet on ...
Jan 4, 2009 -
Re: Chapter 1.0 of My Werewolf Story Re-Write
[/quote]Jeb was a wilderness guide[quote] I think you should write it like "Jeb was also a wilderness guide" because Jeb was his friend so Bane would propably know his work ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: Prologue of my story
Great prologue! The prologue reveals the story very interesting from the very beginning. i would write more about the story but i have nothing else to say because it has ...
Jan 2, 2009
