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Re: The Pyromaniac
Man, this is so cool, I just had to review! You describe the mid-set of your MC brilliantly, especially in the first paragraph, the emotions were spot on. You also ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: The Brotherhood of Silence-Chapter 1
Hey, Tomothy, DirrtyMoney here! Firstly, welcome to YWS! The title drew me in to read this. Lauren2010 said it all, this story was really interesting to read, you can tell ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: Boneyards: 1: Open Your Eyes
Hey! I like this. You describe your MC's emotions quite well and I like your narration too. The bit where your character's like, "God?" that was hilarious, good job! One ...
Mar 31, 2010 -
Re: I finally typed my first chapter to my werewolf story!
I like this. It's nice to read about werewolves once in a while, they don't get talked about often, with all the Edward Cullen madness going around (no offence on ...
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: In Retrospect: Evil Knows No Limit
This is insanely good, you had me glued from the first line. Even though there isn't any dialogue I was sucked into the story. The way you describe everything, I ...
Mar 19, 2010 -
Re: The Joker - Chapter one - Part two
Whoa, this is deep and creepy but i love it. keiraan's right you definitely needed to slow things down a little but other than that this was great. I'll definitely ...
Mar 19, 2010 -
Re: The Book Of Power-New! Chapter 2 Taster
Hey, a newbie here to give my first review! Whoa, you write quite well for an eleven year old, I'm impressed! Since scion gave you a thorough review I'll just ...
Mar 19, 2010