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Re: The Ocean and The Shore
The grammar is weak here. But the idea and plot set is quite creative. Usage of 'their' is not appropriate and the blankness of this poem doesn't hit at the ...
Sep 21, 2016 -
Re: Converting my misery to remedy
This is deeply worded. I could not feel connected to the previous lines as I kept reading down. But here I read some very meaningful thoughts. This is quite creative ...
Sep 21, 2016 -
Re: Do You Love Me?
This touched my heart. The start of the poem fumbled with the vocabulary but as it went, it was beautiful. Rustic and real it is as it spoke what every ...
Sep 21, 2016
