DiannePan

Hello there, I didn't expect the ending, its quite amusing actually :3 I think the story itself flowed well, but the parts in bold seemed rather forced. Other than that ...

Thank you for the wonderful piece. I shall go and click on "follow" right about now :3 Just thought of saying that in the review cause it's kinda creepy reading ...

The saddest summary of a life contains three descriptions: could have, might have, and should have." -Louis E. Boone Celebrate with me There’s the skyscraper I’m going to. It is ...

Hello there, I was really touched by the story and it has a great potential but here are my two cents of a constructive critic. Firs the nit-picks I was ...

Hello there, I was really touched by the story and it has a great potential but here are my two cents of a constructive critic. Firs the nit-picks I was ...

Hello there, I was really touched by the story and it has a great potential but here are my two cents of a constructive critic. Firs the nit-picks I was ...

Hello there, You definitely got something going for you in terms of writing skills so you shouldn't abandon writing; however there are things that need improvement. I can't really imagine ...

I smiled my way through the whole thing; its lovely. Its just the way I feel about writing, like its something sacred. A job well done and idea greatly brought ...

Hello there, I am usually very critical when reading different pieces, I mean, if you write, you've got to put an effort into it. However, Your piece did not just ...

It is a story of two very typical humans, who did something very out of the pattern of behavior, it is a tale of long ago. Like most of their ...