Dia-777

I went with Tommy to a restaurant when we where dating the waitress asked me what I'll have Tommy said I'll take it. I smiled as he read my order ...

I'm nothing, I'm nothing, because now I'm dead. Looking down at myself, looking into the past, i feel pain. I am nobody that will never be extraordinary, excepted, or unique. ...

Defence. Furr.. me too :}

The imagery you create with your poem is wonderful, I love the Romantic feeling of the poem. I like the way you describe the couple also, however your word choice ...

I love the way the poem flows in the beginning. I like the feeling it gives, but towards the end I felt confused, however, i love the idea behind it.

The topic grabs my attention, I love this poem, very creative, The second verse is my favorite, it's do dramatic I also love the tension, and how it builds up. ...

There were a couple of grammatical errors, like (i) and (can't) but, overall I could relate to the poem, and understand it. It was pretty good ;]

I wonder if there is a spec of sunlight in my eyes, even on the gloomiest day of my life. When the rain falls heavy to the ground, it brings ...

My name is Dia or Thea, My passion is for poems, but I do still like writing stories. I live in Phildelphia PA. Pros... I have to read over everything ...