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What I mean't by it was I didn't put it on here for critizing, But for the reader's enjoyment. :)

*Steals your kitty* Muahahah! These are amazingg! :D

Let's all be mellow fellows, Eating marshmellows, Slurping down Jello, Drinking Mellow Yellow, Playing cellos. Mellow ____________________________________________________ Haha, This poem has no purpos

Ello there! I thoroughly enjyed your poem, but a few things. Somehow in the chorus, "So Easily." Doesn't seem to fit well. Maybe because of length.. Maybe do something like, ...

Ello there! I thoroughly enjyed your poem, but a few things. Somehow in the chorus, "So Easily." Doesn't seem to fit well. Maybe because of length.. Maybe do something like, ...

I enjoyed reading this poem, Alot. ^.^ I liked all of it, I can easily spot this as a song! :) If I ever become a famous singer, (Yeah, Right...) ...

Thanks, everyone for this helpful stuffs. :D

haha. It was cute, but it might need a little bit more length... Maybe why this person feels this way... Such and such. :) And watch your title, it did ...

Some of it rhymed, some didnt.' That confuses me... Otherwise, I liked it, 8/10

I like it. :) It explains some about myself, When, In fact, I din't write it.. A lot did start with "you" But I feel it set a repition type ...

Sharp memories, Recollecting in my wondering mind, A reflectance of my past, And what I have been through. Emotions sweep over me, Wrapping around me like a firm blanket, The ...

I liked the last part, How all the poem its like, I'm not that old.... Then the last one... I AM that old. :)

I enjoyed reading this poem, I loved all the details. And Everything. [[Heey, I liked this poem!]] Get the point? I don't have anything bad to say about it! 10/10!

Oh my God. I love this poem. 10/10.

I like the idea, although I do believe I got a bit confused onto whether or not it was supposed to rhyme, or not... 2 stanzas rhymed, and 2 didn't. ...