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Devochka303

  • Art & Photography Re: Nature art!!

    Ok these are really awesome!! For the first picture I love how the flower is pictured from the ground view (how an ant would see it.) the fact that it ...

    Nov 23, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Thistle

    This is a very Sharp picture. I really like it. I also love how the middle is a bright hot pink flower. This is a very good picture. The clarity ...

    Nov 23, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Feathers of Fire

    Hey, I really love your cover. This is exactly something I was looking for. Unless I get something better (which I probably will not), You are in First place. I ...

    Nov 23, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Frozen and Flowing Time

    I really like it. Ihe pictures show emotion in a sad, slow, moving kind of way. [Removed] a little darker, just to kind of put in some suspense. But generally, ...

    Nov 14, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Balliant beauty

    OK this is really great regarding use of Elizabethan language. There are some things from my opinion that you could improve on: to plant their frothy, wisped kiss this could ...

    Nov 11, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Insomniac

    I really like how the poem has in depth meaning. It also leaves you guessing on what it is based on and how it's written. I would improve on the ...

    Nov 11, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Mother and child

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    Nov 10, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Angel

    OK This is a shocking picture. I love it. The picture draws out attention and the clothes fit the face perfectly. I would improve on the eyes. The seem a ...

    Nov 10, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Suddenly

    "But I realized later, it had been a candle of hope." that is a very great sentence that draws in attention. Also I don't know if it is something you ...

    Nov 10, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Dreams

    Hey I really like the metaphors you put in the lyrics

    Nov 10, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: FEATHERS OF FIRE The Secret

    Under a full moon on top of a steep cliff overlooking the small town of Selio sat a young girl. Her hair was the color of bight orange sun rays, ...

    Nov 10, 2011


Poetry lies its way to the truth.
— John Ciardi