Des0late

Firstly, thank you for taking the time to read my poem and giving it a review, it helps a lot c: I am working on the grammar and flow so ...

Thank you! I'm actually working on a sequel to this at the moment, hopefully I'll be able to upload it soon! Thanks again for the review, it helps (: ~Des0late

Firstly, thanks for taking the time to review my work :) I tend to repeat words if I can't think of a replacement but I'm working on it, hopefully it ...

First off, thanks for the welcome (: I am slightly tired of them too but this idea came to me and I thought it would be a shame if I ...

I liked how you started it off, it got me interested and caught my attention immediately. I like how you used repetition, it helped to keep the flow of the ...