DerickJerome

Ok. Actually I also post on websited like All poetry . And when I reposted that just came with the uploaded documemt

Thank You. Like Ive told others, I will make corrections and repost

Thanks for the reply and critique. I will look at your work. And I don't compare my skill to others because for one our style may defer and im not ...

Thanks for the critique. I really appreciate it. I will go back through the poem and make corrections and repost it