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Re: Principle's Death
Nice i love it can't wait to read some more by you!
Dec 24, 2007 -
Re: Prophecy of Elwen Prolouge
This is only for my post just for YWS Sota Techi Age: 15 Hair Color: Blonde Eye Color: Blue Personality: A soft hearted kid that is very smart, and handsome ...
Dec 12, 2007 -
Re: The Beginning (UPDATED)
It's writien very well but i dont like the story line at all it's interesting and original but i just dont like it others may like it but it's not ...
Dec 6, 2007 -
Re: Prophecy of Elwen Chapter 1
Chapter 2 Two months Later…… A New Friend A New Enemy After months of training his new powers in the privacy of his own room Jack had almost reach his ...
Dec 6, 2007 -
Re: Danse Macabre
I llike the plot it sounds very interesting. I think the writing needs some work. Of course i'm a novice so my opinion might not mean much
Dec 6, 2007 -
Re: Night of the Living Pony: Part One
It was very well-written and your pretty good. My problem isn't the writing its what its about. I dont like the Pony theme but really thats all. i'll give it ...
Dec 6, 2007