DennisNeat

A quite moving passage, I like stuff like this. I have to be honest I wondered if it was real, although the fact you posted it under general fiction, tells ...

This sounds like a brilliant idea, a very good opening monolouge to a short story/novel, deppending on how far you want to take it. Personally I would go back and ...

This is the opening sequence to my first novel, I am interested to know what others think of my writing style and decriptive terms. I have never written anything before, ...