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Re: Potato Salad
Alright, I have managed to replace half of my poem but It still isn't up to par. I need help with these lines. Can anyone think of lines that say ...
Jul 6, 2005 -
Re: Potato Salad
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Jul 1, 2005 -
Re: I Wish
I'll have to agree, it had no depth. Seems like you're waiting...waiting...waiting...and still waiting for something to happen. While I was reading this, I imagined a little girl in a ...
Jul 1, 2005 -
Re: anti finite
Even though it's strangely simplistic, it's still a poem. And what's more is it's actually good. A good poem doesn't need to be 50 lines long to get past an ...
Jul 1, 2005 -
Re: Potato Salad
A'ight! This goes to kinda' a hip-hop beat. I've been debating for a few days over if I should post this or not. After much deliberation (and against my better ...
Jul 1, 2005 -
Re: Serenity Awaits
Crying alone, Always alone, Clasping my escape within my hands, Shaking so violently, but careful not to spill, One drop could mean I stay here in this hell, and it ...
Jun 23, 2005 -
Re: stop(an idea)
First off, you sell yourself short. This is a very good poem. Most poems that you may think sucks from the moment you write them, will not show their absolute ...
Jun 19, 2005 -
Re: The Last Poem (not literally)
Well, here goes nothin'... In the second stanza: Took me a while to notice Don’t you think? I must be really stupid, and blind To have only just seen I ...
Jun 19, 2005 -
Re: I Would Like You to Meet Demonic_Tears, the Poet.
Hello all, I thought it would be the polite thing to do, as well as a good way to kick off my first day here, to introduce myself. So, I'm ...
Jun 19, 2005
