Demoness

Hiii, My name is Saga I'm 16, and I live in the north - Sweden Since forever i have had the biggest imagination and now i have figured out what ...

My god, that was a very appreciated comment.. made my... ehm... midnight.. x) Thankuu very much-.- // Sagaa

Thanxx for the recent replies, I love some good criticism... And thanku for the advice... // Sagaa

The Raven call I was walking through the alley, when I heard the ravens call a whisper in the air saying, “catch me before I fall” I was seeking through ...

Wounded A soldier stands with a gun in his hand, In a place they call no man’s land. The rain has created a sea of mud, The war created an ...

Ooh, it was really good. And so true, perfection is truly no more then an illusion, and not even a good one. I'm not very good on revising things.... Cause ...

Thankuu all, for the replies. I know i'm obbsessed with the rhymes. x)) But yeaah. i'll change the spelling mistakes and make some small changes.. dont think i will erase ...

Tahnkuu.. but now i still feel i forced ppl not to be critical to me.. It's okay to critizize a little, but i do very miuch appriciate the nice comment ...

It was a real good poem, but as someone said, rhymes or no rhymes.. it got a bit confusing But still, i liked the story and it was all through ...

Thankuu all for your replies, and a little extra thankuu to the nice parts x)) I know i mess up all the time, but when you dont speak english originally ...

Okay, so you dont like it, but i got it, you dont have to repeat it over and over.. it doesnt make it better.

Aoow thankuu, really mean it x)

My beauty I’m staring into my big, big closet Preparing to become the me I never met. I'm unable to appear as who I want to be, Am not allowed, ...

Thanxx for your reply,, i can agree on some but i dont think u really get my point sometimes. For example "my inner hunger feed" it was no emergency rhyme.. ...

Soul mate Inside of me there is a hunger something eating me from the inside Tearing me appart piece by piece Stealing my heart it's a sickening decease There is ...