Demoness

My Heart; My heart is like any other heart , It can heal, and be torn apart. It can be smiling and it can be sore, As long as it ...

Happy, happy, happy! That's the way I am, Laughing, grinning, giggles! I smile because I can! (This stanza have got the marks wrong, you should have a comma in the ...

Ehm, Thank you so much for reviewing all that! Haha, I've looked it through and edited what I think should be edited. Thanxx alot though. // Hugs and Hearts from ...

[b]Lesson Learnedb] A little boy was given a life, where everything was a strife. Life's just a painful journey. The little boy was taught, never to seek what can't be ...

Thank you very much, Ziggie x)

An honest word I'm not particulary proud of this piece.. so if reading my works... please don't judge the rest to be as awkward as this one... I thought of ...

I'm not a believer, but neither do i have anything against believers, but i dislike those you discribe, those who cant accept somebody elses way of thinking. I thought this ...

Hm... I think I like this pretty much, but I dont think you should build up the peom the way you did. The Stanzas got a different amount of lines ...

[quote="x3CoFx3"] This is an allegorical poem I wrote about attempted and failed suicide. Hm... This was interesting, it was confusing but still, interesting. Though some sentences never seemed to end

Wow, I really liked this one. It was different, but very interesting and I liked it really much. And the "Twisting, Turning, Crying" part was very clever, good work. You ...

It's definentely something most people can relate too, so it got a real good message, and overall I think it was a very good poem. Though I dont understand the ...

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Angel of the dark The gates stood open, Open to hell. And there he stood, He who from heaven fell. There stood I, in front of him, He who fell ...

Ehm... you dont seem to understand a thing of what i wrote, you totally missunderstood it. The repeating at the end, the three line stanzas, they each belong to a ...

Forever alone, In a never again Never again - Will I see you smile - Will I hear you laugh - Will you hold me tight - Will you kiss ...