Demoness

There’s this thing called earth I’ve been here since my birth But this weight of sorrow is more than I can bear I’ve heard of this eternal place and I’m ...

Aoow, Touchy Poem! Allhough there were quite many spelling mistakes and it ruined the whole thing a little and sometimes the rythm got a bit unregular and so on. But ...

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What I need to survive, is what's killing me In a cloud of emotions, surrounding me, I sit safe and sound, but it’s killing me, Because wherever I look, all ...

Wow... this was confusing... I don't think i have anything to add that hasnt allready been said but yeah you gotta work on the stanzas and rythms... But I still ...

Once upon a time we were humans. Once upon a time, in a long forgotten land We were independent people, fighting the world hand in hand. But our humaity was ...

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The lonely ones In a war-filled world they stand alone. Their shallow hearts weep, as their savior dethrone. Their numb souls shatter, falls into pieces, when the number of lives ...

I think this was a really good poem overall... all though the end confused me a little and lowered the standard... My love, i don't hate you anymore For leaving ...

Aoow.. This was really good and full of emotions. I think there could be done some smaller changes to improve it but they have all, allready been mentioned so part ...

I'm not a murderer... I’m not a killer; I’m just a man with a knife I’m not a murderer; I’m just taking your life. I’m not a hunter; I’m just ...

EPIC! I must say, this was one of the best poem i've ever read.. Am a bit jelouse... would have wanted to write it myself. So... well, I don't have ...

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Died for love Him and I won't be why? I love him so All he said was "oh" When I confessed That I was obsessed, With him. He was mine ...

Aow, This poem was awesome, and the way you built it up was very interesting. The whole thing flowed very well and i liked that last line very much. Also ...