Demoness

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I once knew this boy with a joyful smile, when he laughed his mouth gained the length of a mile. He was healthy as few with a childish way, of ...

Naah, I got it! It's an interesting thought, a good theory x) But maybe it's in the wrong forum, "Dramatic Poetry" this was more of a "Philosofic Thought" ;)

Wow, This is soo cool! Best way to show your writing friends that you appreciate them! Awesome

This is the story how Alec and Jane became vampires, how they got involved with the volturii and so on... this were just something to begin with i was going ...

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It's watching you undress A dark shadow haunts you. It knows your adress. It's been watching you undress. It knows your every success, and your every mess. It has been ...

Pain Killers A Fan-art based on Stephanie Meyers, "The Twilight Saga" Alec and Jane are two twins that early in life lost their parents. Their mother was murdered by their ...

I love the stanzas and rhyming and all.... It's well written, but it didnt really touch me... it was more like a well-written text that flowed good and my mouth ...

We shared the forbidden apple Trapped in a room without windows or a single door, the walls are made of mirrors and blood covers the floor. The ceiling displays our ...

Okay, so, to begin with, I like the story within this ALOT, the message and all was really clear. Allthough, what could've been better was your way of building the ...

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Edited version! Cold Love We are caught in a vortex of snow mixed with lies. The cold is as penetrating as your icy blue eyes. The fog is as thick ...

No... i didnt like this very much. I guess it could be good but there was no emotion, you need to describe more and on more than one place the ...

THANKYOU very much, all of you. Love all the good critizism I can get, and here I got plenty of that! But good critizism can be rough comments too off ...