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Demoness

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Son of the moon

    Son of the moon - Slightly edited - That red sky tonight, means the moon is on fire. Your black tongue, hints you’re a pretty little liar. That pale skin ...

    Mar 7, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Nothing's gonna be okay

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    Mar 3, 2011
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    Mar 2, 2011
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    Feb 27, 2011
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    Feb 25, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: If I ever,

    I almost always write too long, too complicated stuff but nobody seem to wanna read such long stuff so I keep them to myself now... this is the shortest thing ...

    Feb 24, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Died for love...

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    Feb 24, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Death takes it all

    Ooh, I just looked this one through.. it's one the first poems I ever wrote.. and I must say I'm a bit surprised.. Most of my old poems really suck ...

    Feb 24, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Angel of the dark

    Thank you, yes, PM me or notify me on my wall and I'll make sure to check it out xD

    Feb 24, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Nothing's gonna be okay

    Thanks you! Hah.. I´don't know how many times I've spelled Lose as Loose... guess I just think it looks better with a double O.. ^^

    Feb 24, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: I need your tips!

    Use adjectives, lots of adjectives. It makes the story become more alive. But be careful not to spend all your time describing things that has no relevance to the story, ...

    Feb 22, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Nothing's gonna be okay

    Aoow, thank you so much! I'm sure you're a really good write as well.. xD

    Feb 21, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Nothing's gonna be okay

    Nothing's gonna be okay Eyes watching, it’s in the fireplace, An evil, burning face Whispering, I know what you desire. Before bursting in to fire. Mouth laughing, it’s in the ...

    Feb 21, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Nothing's gonna be okay

    Eyes watching, it’s in the fireplace, An evil, burning face Whispering, I know what you desire. Before bursting in to fire. Mouth laughing, it’s in the ice, A mouth spitting ...

    Feb 21, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I'm not a murderer...

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    Feb 21, 2011


If a dog will not come to you after having looked you in the face, you should go home and examine your conscience.
— Woodrow Wilson