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Re: He said
Simple, but both touching and cute. It's hopeful... yes, that's the word I'd use. :) It reminded me a little of a poem I wrote myself, it hasn't even a ...
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: Are you writing a novel?
I must have like over 200 officeword-document on my dear computer... ´The thing is, I get this great idea of a book and I can sit at my lap for ...
Jul 9, 2011 -
Re: Dreaded memory- Contest entry
I liked this one! It was an ordinary topic written in an unusual way and the imaginary and the use of words were excellent. I liked the last stanza the ...
Jul 9, 2011 -
Re: Dark Child - Prologue
Thankyou so much for the reviews. DigiDestined18 - Her cloths made her sink but he did too... but the rest of your questions is what I plan to relief in ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: Dark Child - Prologue
Thank you very much for the review. :) It was really helpful actually xD
Jun 21, 2011 -
Re: Dark Child - Prologue
Hi guys, this is the prologue of the story I'm currently writing. I'd like to know what you think about it and if it triggers you to wanna read more ...
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: Cold Love
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May 16, 2011 -
Re: Son of the moon
Thank you so much for the great review. I know the rhymes are forced at times... I just get so mad when I get this great first line and then ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: Twisted mind
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May 16, 2011 -
Re: Twisted mind
Twisted mind I’ve got a sort of twisted mind, I hope they’re rather hard to find. Cause if you got a look inside, I think you’d be happy I lied. ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Nymph
As alwyas... I'm speechless. You're my number one favorit poet... Still I hate you for writing such amazing stuff, it makes mine look like trash xDD But, thankyouuu for letting ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: In life, In love, In death
Poem Nr. 1 Hand in hand, we live. Heart to Heart, we love. Side by side, we die.
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: Stars in the fallen sky
I’d like to be a star in the fallen sky, Watch the world change as time passes by. To be a burning bolt of eternal fire, Be the item of ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: Son of the moon
Oh, thankyou guys for the great reviews. I can see now that this piece is full of errors, the rhyming do sound forced at many places... I wrote this awhile ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: The Voice In My Head
Aah, this one was a long one! But it was really good, and though it started as one of those "doomed to die" poems you managed to sneak in a ...
Mar 7, 2011
