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  • Other Poetry Re: He said

    Simple, but both touching and cute. It's hopeful... yes, that's the word I'd use. :) It reminded me a little of a poem I wrote myself, it hasn't even a ...

    Jul 12, 2011
  • Official Polls Re: Are you writing a novel?

    I must have like over 200 officeword-document on my dear computer... ´The thing is, I get this great idea of a book and I can sit at my lap for ...

    Jul 9, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Dreaded memory- Contest entry

    I liked this one! It was an ordinary topic written in an unusual way and the imaginary and the use of words were excellent. I liked the last stanza the ...

    Jul 9, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Dark Child - Prologue

    Thankyou so much for the reviews. DigiDestined18 - Her cloths made her sink but he did too... but the rest of your questions is what I plan to relief in ...

    Jul 5, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Dark Child - Prologue

    Thank you very much for the review. :) It was really helpful actually xD

    Jun 21, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Dark Child - Prologue

    Hi guys, this is the prologue of the story I'm currently writing. I'd like to know what you think about it and if it triggers you to wanna read more ...

    Jun 20, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Cold Love

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    May 16, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Son of the moon

    Thank you so much for the great review. I know the rhymes are forced at times... I just get so mad when I get this great first line and then ...

    May 16, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Twisted mind

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    May 16, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Twisted mind

    Twisted mind I’ve got a sort of twisted mind, I hope they’re rather hard to find. Cause if you got a look inside, I think you’d be happy I lied. ...

    May 15, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Nymph

    As alwyas... I'm speechless. You're my number one favorit poet... Still I hate you for writing such amazing stuff, it makes mine look like trash xDD But, thankyouuu for letting ...

    Apr 11, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: In life, In love, In death

    Poem Nr. 1 Hand in hand, we live. Heart to Heart, we love. Side by side, we die.

    Apr 11, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Stars in the fallen sky

    I’d like to be a star in the fallen sky, Watch the world change as time passes by. To be a burning bolt of eternal fire, Be the item of ...

    Mar 9, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Son of the moon

    Oh, thankyou guys for the great reviews. I can see now that this piece is full of errors, the rhyming do sound forced at many places... I wrote this awhile ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: The Voice In My Head

    Aah, this one was a long one! But it was really good, and though it started as one of those "doomed to die" poems you managed to sneak in a ...

    Mar 7, 2011


They who talk all day of beauty call all the plain things dirty
— John Darnielle