Demoness

Hellou! Demoness here... :) So now there was finally some action! But it's still Jonah and Tide in their secret little love world and it's cute and sweet and adorable ...

Okay... so you know I really believe in this story and I was so happy to finally get to the point where they kissed and you staged it perfectly. BUT, ...

This is my entry for the "If it were a story" contest where the song I turned into a short story is called "Circle" and is preformed by Flyleaf. :D ...

Name: Neo Venom - few know his first name though as Venom is what he introduces himself as. Race: Vampire Age: Appears to be 21 but has lived for almost ...

Name: Maya Keenan Race: Siren Age: 19 Appearance: Maya is a young and beautiful Siren with a fragile bone structure painted porcelain white. Her fair face is decorated with high ...

Heaven’s a bad place to be Heaven’s a bad place to be, At least if you're as broken as me. If the tears you cry are fake, and lying and ...

Another great chapter! Although... I thought it was so charming that Tide was scared of the chickens, it made her seem like this vurlnerable big-city-girl but then now all of ...

Sorry for the wierd way it's structured... there's something wrong with it cause I keep changing it yet it keep getting back to looking like this :P Our feet were ...

Ty, you already know how in love with this story, and these characters, I am... but I can't help but tell you again.. I freakin'' LOVE this story and these ...

What do you mean this not being good? It's a very dull topic but I love the way you made it interesting and full of imagery and emotion. Soo. don't ...

Hey you, I love the story you're trying to tell here, it's real interesting... BUT, the way you're telling it just takes it down to the bottom to be honest. ...

I just got chills... it was so simple and plain but yet flowed so well and got the message through without sinking to any deeper depths an yeaah.. L O ...

Hahaha, I LOVED IT. So funny, and to say the least exceptionally random. I couldn't find much errors worth pointing out, though you have pressed enter at one occasion where ...

Hellouu! Demoness here and I'm about to give you what I hope to be a helpful review :D My alarm beeps to life, startling me out of yet another boring ...

Okay so... I've honestly never heard a poem read out loud! I always read them on paper, by myself and make the imaginary and rythm and all by myself so ...