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Re: For years.
Meeee... Demoness here, I've come to give you a review... or sort of just adore you! :D I'm truly speachless... I was too caught up and touched by this beautiful ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Four by Four lines
Hellouu, I'm Demoness and I've come to give you my opinion on your work! :) I'll begin with saying.. GREAT WORK! I liked them all alot, not equally much though. ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Appearances
Hii, Demoness checking in to see what you have to say! Overall I think this was a great poem. It wasn't very deep or complicated - the opposite really, very ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: The World is Turning Red
Hii, I, me, not we, is Demoness and I'll be giving you my opinion on your work!! :) I L O V E:d it! Truly amazing imagery, your give such ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Down In The Deep
It's meee! and... Here comes my opinion! Okay so... not only are you an amazing novelist but you can write even better Poetry.. You're truly gifted girl! Haha, I loved ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Heaven's a bad place to be
Haha, thing is this is a song I wrote and the repetition is there because it's the refrain :) I'm aware it's a bit dull and not my greatest work ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Of Fire and Shadow
Hii, I'm Demoness and I'll be giving you my opinion on this piece :) Hope I can be of help. CUTE! I liked it alot, great imagery! I don't know ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Suffocating
Hii, I'm Demoness and i'll be giving you my opinion on this piece! :) Overall I thought this was... No i can't begin like that because it sounds like there ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Tolerance
Hellouu! Demoness here to give you a review! :) This is a good one, it's got a great flow and is both easy to read and relate to. I think ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Orlando State of Mind (Alicia Keys Parody)
Hi, Demoness here and I'll be your reviewer! Haha, this was a funny and sweet thing and you clearly expressed your feelings for the state :) I've never been to ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Goodbye
Heii! Demoness here, I'll give you my opinion on this little piece :) Aaaow, This was a beautiful way of kiss a loved on goodbye! You really captured it! I ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Remembering Your Name
Hii, I'm Demoness and I'll give you my opinion on this piece here and now; :D Oh my,, I really loved this one. So full of both imagery and emotion! ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: tension
Hi, I'm Demoness and I'll revewing your work today! :D Tension stares through me bore holes in my back catch the gaze look away let your eyes fall to the ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Never Your Fairytale
Hi, I'm Demoness and I'll be reviewing your work! :) Okay, so overall I really loved this piece, it was beautifully described and all. But, you've made a few mistakes ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Choices - The Preface
Hi, I'm Demoness and here's a quick opinion on your work :) I think this is promising. It's a great beginning and get's the reader.. or at least me... hooked ...
Jul 31, 2011