Demoness

Oh my god this was so intense.. I had to read faster and faster cause I was holding my breath until the countdown came to an end! I love your ...

Aoow, what a sweet story! I've got a little brother who is five and you managed to capture both the frustation they can cause you to feel along with the ...

Nice work, I liked it. You clearly don't suffer from lack of imagination, so that's good... but I still think that you could've used some more descriptive words instead of ...

You've got a cool style of writing and you use great description and creates beautful settings... There were a few nitpicks but these have allready been pointed out so all ...

Oooh yes, I'd like to keep on reading! Great description and even though nothing much happened it was still an intruging beginning. As for my impressions on the characters.. The ...

Yeeh. They talk.. but usually not to me, they talk to each other inside of me or one of them takes over my body when I'm walking home from the ...

There are clearly alot of little things that could be adjusted to fix this thing up a bit but the previous reviewers has all ready pointed out those things so ...

So this is strong! Many can realte to this I believe and you truly get your message through. To me, the flow and rythm worked but I'd like some puntucation ...

Heeyy you! I'm Demoness, here's my review! Hm.. this may be repetative and didn't consist of any imagery or imaginary at all.. Still, I wasn't disturbed by this, it was ...

Neey, this is sad! I want to read more though so I guess it's good :D I loved that thing with "big things" and "little things" it was a sweet ...

Heey, I'm Demoness and here comes my opinion on this piece! ( I promise not to comment on the punctuation! ) Soo, because I can't comment on the punctuation I ...

Hellou, I'm Demoness and here's my review of your touchy little poem xD Easy to read, simple but full of emotion! - Yep that's pretty much what I gather from ...

This is me, Demoness! I've come to give you my opinion on the piece you've written here :) Haha, I've never read a poem on a topic like this and ...

Hello You! I'm Demoness and I'd like to give you my opinion on this little piece of yours. I can't live without music.. If my heart is what keeps me ...

This is Demoness speaking!!! I've come to give this piece my opinion... and adore it a little cause well, it deserves it :) Soo.. I must begin with telling you ...