Demoness

So I wasn't thinking when I wrote this I just wrote... and this is what became of it. Read and Enjoy and perhaps leave me some helpful criticism :) My ...

Revenge is Sweet Do you hear me cry, can you hear me moan? When each night I sit by this cold stone, Black roses planted in this god-damned mud- Here ...

Daisuki! Hi, this is Demoness! I must begin with say that I am truly impressed, this is really good! Personally I am more a fan of structured poems where lines ...

Aow Smyliee! You're very pretty! Your Kittie too!

Heey, I have some questions about how the story will move on from here... One; Should Hector announce that Keira is back or should it be kept a secret? Two; ...

Keira "You're saying I have an ancestor that's an elf?" Keira asked, eyes huge and mouth open. "I'm not saying anything, it's just a thought." Kosey said seemingly lost in ...

Non-Rival! I don't know what that Mental Institution did to you but I it's clear your writing-skills has increased these past months. This was brilliant! I loved it! For one ...

Hi again! So the grammar in this peice was much better and you've managed your punctuation qutie well. Though the structure is very wobbly and you should really try keeping ...

Hi Joseph, and again; Welcome to the YWS! I will start just correcting some grammatic errors that I found, some where faults others are what I find sounds better. I ...

Dramatic-Sparkle! - It's the little Demon who totally forgot she loves to review but totally remembered and came to review yours only it was so good it needn't be reviewed! ...

And here it finally comes, The profile of the Elvish Queen! Name: Síscéal Naunar Gender: female Age: Appears to be quite young, 25+, something like that. In reality though, she’s ...

Keira “Hah, that’s funny… Ice. Hmpft.” Keira laughed a nervous little laughter and tried to make sense in what Kosey had just said but failed instantly. Control of ice – ...

Keira Keira was angry, more than so, she was dirty and had gotten scratches all over her body and some were bleeding lightly causing her not only to be a ...

Tahaa, I guess I did! (Not egocentric at all ^^ )

Here comes the little elf's profile, I'll post the major-queen-leader-ish one as soon as possible :) Name: Lúna Da-Lea Gender: female Age: Lúna is only a child, counting in elf-years ...