Demoness

Helluu, I'm Demoness and here comes my review.. or it's not a review cause I say nothing helpful it's just a declare of my admiration for the piece xDD Simple ...

Hi, I'm Demoness and I'll be giving you a quick review on this piece! :) Overall I thought this was a very good poem, it was warm, fuzzy and cozy ...

Hi you! I'm Demoness and here's my opinion on your poem! :) To begin with I thought you delivered a very important message in a beautiful way! Hi do believe ...

Hm.. I now noticed how some people write in first person and others in third... is it okay to do either or should we all stick to one way?

Haaii, Demoness here to review your work Hhaa, cute! This was a great poem with beautiful ending.. you could make some improvement on the punctuation but otherwise it was pretty ...

Okay, so I'm not going to say this was bad just because I'm bugged with you being bugged with critisism... I will though, say what I have to say and ...

Hii, a quick review of this piece which I must say was quite amazing! This was really beautiful! Although I thought the rythm was good in each stanza by themselves ...

Heey, here's my review! Okay so.. I feel that you're telling a great story here... it's just that I don't really feel the message come through to me because I ...

Hii you! I've come to inflict my opinion on your poem! Hope I can help or.. say something meaningful at least xD Oh my... This was so sweeeeet and cute ...

Heeii, Demoness here to inflict her opinion on this piece! This was fairly enjoyable... more than so, it was quite amazing. The rythm and flow was a bit off at ...

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Maya Keenan The vampire stared at her with red, blood-thirsty eyes as his cold, bony fingers grasped around her neck and held her pushed up against a big oak tree. ...

If you're a Vampire Diaires fan or simply just thinks Damon Salvatore is too hot to resist - please join the DS-Club xD

Body vs. Mind There's an on-going struggle Between my body and mind, My body's functioning like most others, But my mind is of its own rare kind. My body needs ...

Oh myy, This was deep, beautiful and heart-wrenching! Great desciptions and imagery and you really capture the emotions! I didn't find the rythm and flow too choppy but it still ...