Demoness

Puff... that was one long poem. I liked it alot though, great imagery and an interesting view of the afterlife. I don't have much complains.. maybe if you shortened it ...

Aoow, this was a really sweet poem, very emotional and all! I liked it alot. Great rythm and flow... maybe think about puntuation? Otherwise. "High Five* This is my favorite ...

Haha, what a fun idea! I love the imagery and descriptions! - Things that could be improved though... * Structur, please chop the big stanza in to a few smaller ...

Very Well Done! I liked the imagery of this piece and would really like to see the picture that trigged your imagination to write this! Nitpicks! - Punctuation! It help ...

Hellou you! Here comes I, to review your piece! In the darkness of the night, Where no moon can pierce with light, In the shadows where it lies, A murd'rous ...

Fantastic! Brilliant! Amazing! I love these kinds of poems with a mysterious evil with an inner good. One thing that kinda bugged the flow for me was the captivated letters ...

Oh well... Inkwell kinda managed to say all that needed to be said about punctuation and grammar errors so all I've got left to say what that I LOVED the ...

Yes, indeed it was an interesting poem. I love the flow and rythm of it and your imagery was great, could be slightly improved I guess but... well, good! The ...

I'm the Demon with an ess and here's a quick little review! :D Haha, this poem took an interesting twist. I LIKE IT! Think you should look over the puntuation ...

I'm sorry, I don't think she noticed your post since she was caught up writing her own story... but maybe you can burst into the caravan after Silver is free ...

Neo Venom Venom heard the beautiful siren-call and bounced up from his seat in front of the caravan. In difference to most the sound didn’t compel him… Venom wasn’t touched ...

Maya Keenan The frustration grew inside of Maya… mere seduction wouldn’t do it with this one so maybe she had to turn to more drastic forms of action. This vampire-priest ...

Helloouuu, This is Demoness speaking and she's come to give her opinion on this piece! Soo.. Well... I thought this was a great poem. BUT the flow was a bit ...

Maya Keenan “A priest? Well then, let’s say I believe you” Maya said, trying to cover the frustration she felt inside of her. She had tried her best, using her ...

Helluuee, Demoness here and I'll be giving you my opinion on this piece. And I'll begin with saying.... WOW! This poem is so powerful! You've used such great imagery and ...