Demoness

Haha, this was obviously original and really funny.. though a bit scarrrrry.. :P Love how you direct it to your readers, making them a part of the poem, without that ...

Wow, this is so great! Not only the rythm and flow but the entire message and the way you delivered it. So very, very good. I'm at awe! You're structure ...

Heei, I'm Demoness, here's a quick.. ehm, not review but something :P Haha, aaow how sweet. A dedication to your summer! I liked it, it was a light and simple ...

Love the story and content of this poem but I've got some nitpicking to do I'm afraid :p * CAPITALS for one... ! * Secondly... Look over you punctuation, I ...

Hellu, Je suis le demon du Ess! Néeh, Hi! I like this poem, great rythm and flow and you truly have some great imagery and descriptions going for you! To ...

Hellu, Je suis le demon du Ess! Néeh, Hi! I like this poem, great rythm and flow and you truly have some great imagery and descriptions going for you! To ...

Hm.. yeh I agree with previous speakers - bit cliché! Sweet poem but it lacks emotion and imagery... Try spicing it up a bit and throw in some more descirptive ...

I thought I rated it 16... but it was 18... when it should've been 12.. Messed up stuff. :P

Sorry guys, I'm not good at keeping things short :P Maya Keenan “What now!” Maya shrieked and glared at the horses when the caravan suddenly came to an abrupt end. ...

Aaow, this is a great poem! Short but not too simple... positive thing! You've got such great imagery, I agree on the two previous speakers about the "Leaves skating" very ...

Hm... I think, like the previous reviewer that this piece has got alot of potenital but that it misses that... touch that makes you swoon. I don't know what's missing ...

Hey! This piece had a real great content, and you said alot of true things in a good way. However, I must agree with what Jenna said. This sounds more ...

Amazing poem! Great story told, I love how in these few lines you managed to involve so many factors.. god, good, evil, life and death! Just Brilliant! All though, if ...

Everlasting, Never-ending I want to see your face, I want your face to see mine, But we watch with memories. I long to hold you tight, I long for you ...

I like you unic style of writing and the content of this poem was very powerful! I didn't wear my error-glasses today so all I could see was a whole ...