Demoness

Hm.. this was quite enjoyable. Simple, had a lack of imagery though.. it was just, straight forward! But that's not always a bad thing ^^ The flow was great though ...

Hellie Halloue again! This poem was quite amazing, great imagery and the content was so sweet and beautiful! I loved the structure, but you could work on your punctuation. Also.. ...

Heyaa! I'm Demoness, here's a little inflict on this piece I must begin to say... ; Aoow, what a sweet poem! Simple but still Suuuuper! Love the flow, the imagery! ...

Oh my goddess, and hey, I'm Demoness! This is such a touching poem! Amazing story you're telling here, you deliver a very important message and I love how even though ...

Heelluue, Here comes a quickky, but hopefully helpful, review!! Ehm so I always begin with the lesser good.. No I dont, but now I am! Eh, so- * You've managed ...

Soo.. here's my review of this piece! To begin with.. your title "If my life were a dream" it's supposed to be "was a dream" I believe :) At first ...

Wow, this was really great. Simple but Sweet! The rythm and flow worked wonderfully and so did most of your rhymes. All though, in the second stanza, the last line ...

Maya Keenan “You have got to be kidding me!” Maya growled when the caravan, once again, stopped. She stumbled on to the back where the doors stood open and Venom ...

Haha, don't worry! I did see the beauty in this piece and your symbolism is quite extra-ordinary. With imagery I sort of mean symbolism.. I mean you describe things very ...

Ohh my god.. I'm like; "Yeh, sure I'll review it.." And then I enter your portfolio.. finds it and than I'm like-.. WOAAAh. Such a massive bunch of words! But ...

Oh myy, this is so, very, very good! AMAZING, FANTASTIC, INCREDIBLE! Really, I love the strucutre, the flow the rythm... EVERYTHING You're imagery and creativity is absolutely stunning.. Impeccable re

Overall, this wasn't that bad. Good flow and structure. I did find it a bit dull though, not much imagery and a bit too short... if writing short you gotta ...

I like this, it was.. like a previous spoker said.. a bit creepy.. a good creepy though! The stanzas was a bit choppy and it felt more like a piece ...

Aaow, this was so saaaad, but still touching and really truuuly amazing to read! You must add some punctuation though because it's hard to know when it's okay to breathe... ...

Heey, this was quite good! Like the the imagery with the onion representing guilt and all, cool add! It was a bit depressing though... but that's not all bad, if ...