Demoness

Okay so this is a sore subject and you managed to get the emotion through, really touching and sad it was indeed. Things that could be improved though... * You ...

Hha, this is so true! Sleep brings alot of different emotions depending on the circumstances! I like the flow and rythm of this piece and even though it might not ...

Okay so.. I like this topic, I've written a similar poem, but the argument was between my body and mind and I was sortof just stuck in the middle. You ...

Okay soo. I love your structure and rythm, this piece flows just amazingly. I did find the content a bit dull and cliché though, there wasn't much imagery and it ...

Hellou my Non-Rival! Demoness speaking here! I must say... ehm. WOW, even without the punctuation this was quite amazing. I was hooked after the third line and then I kinds ...

Seriously! You've got three versions of this poem! Haha, it would've been fun if I thought the last one dissappeared and I spent another 5 on making another new one ...

Haha, this is a turn of event.. I thought my post dissappeared when my computer died... turns out there were two posts.. looking just the same. Haha, well now you've ...

Gosh I wanna kill myself.. I just wrote the longest review ever and then my lap died so I couldn't finnish it. Heaven did I get Happy! I'�ll try to ...

Maay goooooood! This was endless! I got through it though, and it wasn't that painful :D I'll begin with the lesser good stuff; (I won't go in detail with the ...

Aoow, this is so great. Amazing dedaction to Japan, it was really touching! I love that you really manage to get the message and feelings through with your words, it ...

But I wanna be an evil elf!

Hm.. I'm sorry, but I find this piece quite cliché. There are loads of poems just like these, and if this is the topic you want to focus on you ...

Hellie Hallou! My name.. or username or whatever, is Demoness and I'm here to inflict my comments on this piece. I'll begin with saying.. INTERESTING topic! It really is a ...

Hellie Hallou! My name.. or username or whatever, is Demoness and I'm here to inflict my comments on this piece. I'll begin with saying.. INTERESTING topic! It really is a ...

Heey again, seems like your poems are all over the place! This one was quite original, I like it! Nice stanzas!, and I like the "Three one-syllable words" that you ...