Demoness

I agree and disagree with every single spoker before me. This poem doesn't mean anything, it doesn't make any sense... but still it does. Yep, it is going somewhere, it's ...

Aoow, Ney! This was sad and hilarious all at ones... The way you wrote it, with those quick hurried words that made me almost stressed... very good! Original, and I ...

This was simple and smooth - Meaning it was short and flowed well... That's good, but I also feel like this poem wasn't very original, it was ordinary and didn't ...

I like this poem! It's like so many other poems I've read and still very original! I like the theme and the structure of the stanzas allthough I feel like ...

Oh this poem is so strong!!! I didn't think it flowed that well.. but somehow... and this isn't supposed to be able to happen - but I kind of liked ...

I don't really get what the title had to do with the content of this piece... I still find it being an interesting read, it had it's flaws and faults ...

Oh myyy, you must have been filled with quite alot of anger when you wrote this. Violence seems like quite the innocent word compared to what you've written. ANyhowss, I ...

Aaow, I loved your previous poem and this one was just as touching! You are good at summoning emotions and feelings inside your readers (or inside me at least) you're ...

Okay, so I feel like you do have something important to say but you're in a bit too much hurrey to do so! Your idea is great and some lines ...

This is good, Not only because you've used great structure, rhymes and because it flows smoothly but because you dare write something like this. Faith is tricky and sticky and ...

I like this! It flows well, has great rythm and rhyming scheme too and I don't find any of the rhymes forced - PLUS IN THE CORNER for that one ...

Aoow, original, simple but smooth! Love the rythm and flow and no forced rhymes! NICE JOB! I also like how you didn't ever mention the spider in this contenxt and ...

Haha, you're so right! But I've got to write, or my mind threatens to suffocate me with it's massive mess of tangled words and thoughts and images and ideas... I ...

Hi! Dear, feared Non-Rival! Here comes a review as promised! So this is quite sad, and I feel so sorry for her children!!! I like the story though but I ...

Yeesh. SHAME ON ME, this is horrible.. I must either erase or fix it up immidiately!! Thanxx for the reviews anyhows :D