Demoness

I like the content of the poem! It's bravely described and full of imagery. I am though, always picking on people's structures and I will do so with yours too. ...

Wooaaah, this was... ehm, different - good different though, very original, I like original! The place where the story is set is interesting too, and I like the way you ...

Wow, this original if not Brilliant and Hilarious too! I didn't find much flaws with this, it was an enjoyable read and I'd love to read more of your works! ...

So this was quite depressing... I sort of wanted to weap a little bit myself! But it was a good depress, sad and sweet all at ones! I feel that ...

This was most certainly intriguing! Mysterious, dark and yet it ends quite hopeful! I'd like to know more though - you should keep this story rolling! :D Your grammatic errors ...

This is a beautifully described story and as Froggy said, it has potenital to be a poem just as sweet! I like how you put us all in the mind ...

I don't want to run in and pick this a art with all the grammatic errors and stuff, because there were a few. But I think previous reviewers caught almost ...

Good Luck In The Contest! I like this story, it's descriptive, doesn't leave the reader unsatisfied, you begin looking for something, you find it, you think about it and there's ...

Neeeey! This is waay too sad! My little brother's name is Elliot and gaah, it just made it even sadder since I imagines him sitting there in the backseat of ...

Again, your descriptions are impeccable! This time you do hint that there are intruging stuff to come but it is still little that hasa happened, you just express long, vivid ...

Goosh! You've got some true gifts when it comes to imagery and descriptions. This intro is just so vivid! Nice, nice job! All though, it's not very intruging, I mean ...

Oh my god! This was so good! I started reading and I was just.. (Ah, fun, another boring, lame, suicide) Then the story just took such a twist and.. oh, ...

Ha-Ha, this was funny, it had it's flaws and faults and I don't like how you call Voldemort "Voldie" all of a sudden. It would've been fun if Harry spoke ...

Neey, sad, sad, song/poem/thing! I like this piece, it's touching, a little dull at times where it lacks imagery and is just like - word, word, word, BUT WHERE ARE ...

Whoaa! Confusing! You need to create some serious order in to this, this is just words on words - poetry sections are necessary for one! Gaah. Well, I'm done freaking ...