Demoness

Hm.. what can I say...... I LOVED IT! Absolutely L O V E:d it! The structure - perfect, the flow, the rythm, impeccable! Okay so there were a few, few, ...

This poem was quite delightful to read, I enjoyed it! It was longing, yet hopeful and just cozy.. if you know what I mean :D I don't have much complaint ...

Hi, I'm the half-crazy Demoness, and here's a little thought of mine! I am quite obsessed with commenting on structures and I want it to be orderly, for there to ...

Oh my! If powerful love what was you were aiming for you've reached your goal! This is so sweet, yet sad but beautiful! It's a little Romeo-and-Juliet feeling over it ...

Hii my dear, feared fellows! As many of you might have noticed I've gotten half-crazy reviewing lately and therefore I've opened this thread so that anyone who's looking for a ...

Heellue you, Megsug made a quite impeccable review and grasped almost every flaw with this so I will only tell you what i like about this; And that is.... The ...

Heey, I really like this poem! I love how you rather keep the text interesting and serence and sacrifice a few primary rhymes to something secondary or just something to ...

Aoow, I'm stunned! It's something really touching about this piece. I have read few things similar to it and I must say I'm quite amazed. Some lines were a bit ...

Aoow, you're writing about the moon aren't you! That's so sweet 'n cute 'n beautiful! I loved it! Great rythm and flow and emotion and all! Amazing!! I can't even ...

So hey! This was quite amazing! Love, love loads of Love to this! It could've contained a bit more imagery perhaps but I still find you grasp the meaning of ...

Helluue, I likes this piece very much! I love you're imagery and the second line with coffe and icecream was just great.. but it would be even better if you ...

Wooaaah, this was the oddest thing I've read! I can't even say if that's a compliment or not... this was just eh, original - I do like original though so ...

This is inspiring.. And powerful and strong.. yet sad... this is alot actually! It's hopeful too! It truly holds loads of emotions and I really like it. I like your ...

[quote]I turned to see what room I had hide in, the chairs and desks where (It should be were) stacked against the walls. In the centre of the whole room ...

Neeey, this is sooo, sooo sad! Beautiful yet, but sad! I agree on the others, this could make a great short story! At times it actually felt more like a ...