Demoness

Hello! My favorite Rival! Here I've come to review this piece of yours! So I'll begin to say that this was both intriguing and amazing and cute at the same ...

This was amazing! It's such a reappearing event, and I think you made a great job in grasping the full meaning of this. The way you wrote it made the ...

Hey Tyy! What happened! When I stopped bugging you about posting.. you stopped posting! I need ya to keep the good work up girl! How can I live if I ...

Aaow, yes, I agree with Passion! This is so cute, sweet, innocent and yet so Powerful! Good strucutre, flow and rythm and no flaws with the punctuation. It was a ...

Love, love, love! This is the sort of poetry I love reading, when the rythm and flow is impeccable, the structure of the stanza's keep its pattern and no rhymes ...

Okay so Demeter made a quite full blown review here with grammatic stuff and all so I will just state my overall impression of this. - I like the twist ...

Hello, this was quite intense to say the least! I don't like the attitude most people with eating disorders have, how they just let everything get to them and how ...

I like your idea of true hapiness! Being a happy, careless, innocent little child - but if that's what your inner heart most desires you at least have the luck ...

I began reading this a couple of weeks ago and was fascinated then! I read it now again and was even more compelled! I like your title alot at first ...

Talithia I paced through the woods, dodging branches and leaping over stones and roots. I was on the path towards the city, but avoided walking on the road since I ...

Hm.. overall this was pretty good. But I've got a few things to point out; - Structure, your lines differ too much in length and that disrupt the flow - ...

Okay so this was obviously sad! Yet... I found that the ending was a happy one even though it ended with death, simply because I liked the thought of the ...

Hello, you're only fourteen and still manage to write such intriguing stories! I like the way you express and describe your narrator - you've given him a true personality, meaning ...

This is the exact type and kind of poetry I enjoy reading! Nice structure, amazing rythm and flow and non-forced-rhymes that makes the poem so delightful to read! Very good! ...

Quick, simple and plain but still an enjoyable read. It flowed real well and I've got nothing more than one little nitpick. "Money's spent." I don't think this line fit ...