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Re: The beginning of the end contest entry.
Hellue, IcyFlame! I haven't given up reviewing just yet, so hope this will come to help! ;D “Thoughts are very dangerous things,” declared Mrs Gumridge importantly, stroking her broomstick fondly.
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Re: My Spin on Grapefruit
Heey again, I'm sure others will see that too! Yeh, I like the colours because they remind me of a grapefruit... but I don't like them since they make it ...
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Re: Christmas in August
Aow.. how sweet.. I haven't given away a gift ever.. what a cruel Demon I am. But this reviewing-episode of mine has given me a great amount of points so ...
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Re: The Meaning
Hello, I'm Demoness and I've come to give you a review of this work! What is my true purpise of life ? - I believe you mean "Purpose" And what ...
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Re: Needless
How can I resist reviewing a piece with a title that overpowering ^^ Well, well, here I go. Baah, I don't know where to begin. I like the emotion and ...
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Re: The Walk Alone
This is an interesting though. I think we all feel like we just wanna be cut off from the world sometimes, so that we can think over the lives we ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: Carry Me Home Chapter 18
Finally! (Oh, hey, it's me Demoness by the way!) So, I was really intrigued in the beginning, I thought like. "Aah, finally some action" but I kinda suspected it was ...
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Re: Hell's Rollercoaster
Aoow, this is like the fifth time I've read it.. It just make me so happy! It's so very, very funny! I just had to say that again and that ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: Seas of deception
Hi! I'm Demoness and here's my review of you beautiful poem! Deception is here, Deception is there, Deception is with her, Is there a truthful place? I sail in these ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: The Everyday Survivors; prologue
For a prologue this is all it is supposed to be! It's mysterious yet intiguing and it most certainly leaves the reader wanting to know more! I, for one, would ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: Open Sea
I promised to give you a review... I open your portfolio - And find this :) I'm glad I did though since Robert Frost "Fire and Ice" is my number ...
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Re: Has Been Deleted
Okay, so the DramaLlama grasped most faults and flaws and also alot of the things that was good with this. I don't agree with her on how she wanted you ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: i Was Here
Hey, so, I usually don't go in to nitpicking stuff but since I'm first to review this thing, I will do so today! I'm afraid there were quite many grammatic ...
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Re: Demonic Examinations!
Haha, that might be true x)) But maybe people have some hidden, forgotten piece that i haven't managed to dig up... who knows! :D
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Re: The Ghost I Hear
Hm, so this wasn't too bad! It was pretty good actually, maybe even great! I do though agree with what others have said - you rely too much on your ...
Aug 10, 2011
