Demoness

Hello, I couldn't find any grammatic errors that hasn't all ready been pointed out so, I'll point out a few other things that i feel should/could be improved :) One, ...

So this was a beautifully, well-written poem! The flow was a bit choppy at times but not something to dwell over too much since it went on well for the ...

Soo, Hi, I'm Demoness and I was intentially going to review this for you but I ended up just admiring it for it's beauty! Woww! I've never read anything like ...

So, I've read this a couple of times now and decided over again that it's too massive for me to review... Yet I'll give it a try. The reason I ...

Helloue! This is a very strong poem emotionally - it brings up a sore subject and I think you've done a great job expressing the hurt one must feel being ...

This is a really sweet and beautiful poem and I love your rhymes and the way you built up this text! I just had a problem with the first two ...

They don't belong together, each text in bold is a title for the piece to come! That might explain the choppiness! :P

Heyy, VERY impressive to manage with that rhymescheme and still manage not to make any of them sound forced! The piece flowed on well and I liked the rythm too.. ...

So I thought this was very good for someone who's doesn't consider themselves a poet! I like the structure and how every last line in each stanza rhymes with eachother, ...

Read; So, here's a bunch of little pieces taken from the depths of my minds... some are short poems, others are random thoughts or statements... Enjoy! :D Pieces of my ...

Okay so.. I was gonna review this but then I read MMM:s review and well... I also read you poem and you're writings are just so much deeper and advanced ...

No you're right! It's supposed to be "passed" I read it as.. like he was trying to get over something that had happened earlier... I donno what I was thinking ...

Hellue! I'm Demoness, and here comes my review! Eh, so - I like the story you're telling here and like Meg said, it makes you think, which is good. You ...

Helluee! This was a quite delightful thing to read, it was vivid, full of descriptions and it also flowed well... yet, I've got one thing to point out. Mainly, it's ...

Hello, This is the Demoness speaking! I've come to review this piece! So.. I like this idea - with only three words per line and for the better part of ...