Demoness

Name: Keira Alamea Age: 17 Gender: Female Race: Human Rank: Princess of Asyra Allegiance: Self Appearance: Keira is a slim but fit young girl with fragile bone-structure. Her head is ...

Maya Keenan “Curse the wolves!” Maya yelled and stomped her foot in the ground. She and Venom had entered the cave only to find… nothing. The wolves had run off, ...

Heeyyy! THIS IS AWESOME! Really, really amazing. You're a very good poet, I like your style of writing and your stanzas are very well built! Good, good, good. I have ...

Okay, so this is a poem easy to realte to and you manage through your words to get your message through. There were a few flaws with it though. For ...

Aoow, this is soo Sweet! Bit choppy structure, but part from that this was quite amazing! I really liked it! I like how the title hints something tragic and horrid ...

Hum... I really like the content of this, I mean, you're very creative and use vivid descriptions and stuff. But as it is, it feels more like a bunch of ...

Kaay... so I get what you're trying to say and the underlying message is a good one. I just feel like the way you express what you think and feel ...

This is such a powerful piece, just plain truth! I like it, great title and the content is great - you really forward you message and maybe the structure is ...

Aah, This was sweet poem. You've got great structure and flow in your stanzas and the beginning was very good, it's vivid and urges the reader to keep on going. ...

Hah, this was interesting read! I like the mysterious little aura it holds... I have no idea what you're talking about but it was pretty cool that you let the ...

Kay.. so I liked this poem and the content of it but I agree with Dani it doesn't have any typical poetry structure... and of course it doesn't have to ...

Geeh, this was unexpected! I like it alot though espacially these lines; He plummeted down, and yelled back at me “Come, come, come fly with me” I agree with Icy ...

Geeh, I've never read anything quite like this! I loved it! I've been thinking of something similar to this, but I'm glad I never wrote it down because I couldn't ...

Okay so I thought this was quite lovely... I mean it didn't say that much and maybe you should have tried to mash something of greater importance into this and ...

Oh, so yes this was dark but still sweet somehow... This wasn't meant to go to deep into the words so I'm not gonna complain on the lack of depth ...