Demoness

This is great! I like how you write down these odd but creative questions and then give them answers! Sometimes leaving the reader thinking is good, but it's even better ...

Perhaps your right about your title being cliché but it doesn't make it bad, I actually liked it alot. Same goes for your poem! I liked almost everything about this ...

Geeh, you're very VERY talanted! Your style and the words you use and how you use them... it's all just amazing! This poem is just beautiful, truly one of the ...

Hi, I love this poem! I can totally relate and I like the way you've structured it and even though I mostly prefer poems that are more than a few ...

Heey, This is a really good poem! The second half is really sweet and admirable... but I think that what the previous reviewers suggested about building up the poem differently ...

Aooow, This is soo cute! I think many people can relate too! It was written in a simple form with primary and secondary rhyming and even though all rhymes didn't ...

This is really, very good! I love the title, it's beautiful! When I looked at this piece from above I thought it seemed a bit choppy as the structure of ...

Heey! I like this poem alot! It's very vivid and full of imagery, you're truly a cretaive writer and you use very good, decriptive words! I also love the single ...

Helluee Destie! I really enjoyed reading this piece! It was lighthearted and just sweet overall. "When I sing I’m in a world, Completely my own, and it doesn’t really matter, ...

Duckiee! I didn't know you write poetry! Better yet, that you were this good at it! I really enjoyed reading this piece. You've got great structure of your piece and ...

Aoow, this reads like a lullaby to me! It was really sweet and beautiful! The punctuation was a little so-so but other than that I loved it! I'd mostly be ...

Hellue again! I like the imrovement! This line is more powerful, yet I still feel it's a bit long but I guess it'll have to do, shorten it down and ...

Heeey! You wrote a poem about my dear ally the Demon! Tzz, neeh! I really liked the idea of this piece though, it's dark for sure but not in a ...

This is incredible! It's honest and straightforward in a... well, not so forward way ^^ I really enjoyed reading it and the content of it is just great! I like ...

Hii, I really respect your use of rhyming shemes, nothing sounds forced and it just ease the flow and make the poem amazingly good! I also like the repeated use ...