Demoness

Hi Hiccup! I'm Demon, and I thought I'd give you a review! I'll begin with saying; this is a great poem! Your way with words is great and the imagery ...

This is so beautiful! That you dedicated this to a mentally ill girl is just so sweet! As for the poem it was incredible too! Nicely written stanzas with lines ...

Oh my god! This is very good! The title totally caught my interest and I don't know if I'm stupid but I was so not expecting that ending! I read ...

Hii! So... seperately each of your lines are beautifully written with great imagery - but as a whole I can't seem to find the message. The two last lines seem ...

Heey Cailey! I really enjoyed reading this, the way you structured the poem up and the short, lines and a little choppy flow reminded me of a shattered mirror and ...

Hey, this was a nice thing to read. It wasn't to deep and long and complicated, but not too simple to be dull. You use good imagery and an interesting ...

Hi, I'm Demoness, thought I'd give you a review :) So, this is pretty good! I like the message and the way you delivered it was okay, it was a ...

Wow, this is incredibly good writing! You're imagery is so good and I like the dark aura that's hanging over this piece! Geeh, you're really talanted! The playful kind-of way ...

Simple but Sweet! This was pretty awesome, not much imagery but still alot of emotion, nice job! My only nitpick is that you should add some punctuation to aid the ...

Simple but Sweet! This was pretty awesome, not much imagery but still alot of emotion, nice job! My only nitpick is that you should add some punctuation to aid the ...

Keira – Forest nearby Asyra “How much further is it?” Keira asked once again as she leaped over a fallen tree, she’d been complaining for the better part of the ...

This is really, really good! Very creativly written and beautiful and sad and... aah just amazing! There was a tear hinted in the corner of my eye at the end. ...

Helluee! I love the content of this, it's so touching and you're way with words is amazing! The structure though... it's not very poetical and it doesn't give space for ...

AOow, this is just beautiful and heartbreaking! The language may be simple and not that impressing but the simplicity of it was pretty great. My only complaints are the lack ...

Well.. the lines you've written are very good... but as a whole this poem doesn't say much. After reading the title I was surprised at the content of this... not ...