Demoness

Hellooo! So if you added some punctuation for the sake of it... structured this up a bit - like, divide it into stanzas mainly... I think this poem could be ...

Ohai! This is a quite lovely poem, but it has got no structure! Both Veritas and AnAmericanTeenager listed how you should have written it :) But part from the structure ...

So I guess this poem is pretty cliché and there wasn't much originality in it... but I still loved it. It was heartful and you've managed to capture so much ...

Oh, oh, oh this is good, good, good! I was hooked after reading two lines! I can't really put my fingers on what was so good about it, but I ...

Heey, you're obviously a very talanted writer because I love the content of this and the way you wrote it. But I really dislike your use of so many capitalized ...

I could so realte to this, I agree with "Suddenly" it felt meaningful! You use great descriptions and imagery and make the poem vivid! I agree with "Suddenly" on it ...

This is really beautifully written! The flow is really good and I love a good structure, and your structure is very good! You've also used amazing imagery and this piece ...

Helluee! I'm Demoness and I've come to give you a review! So, to begin with I must say your imagery is really great, this piece is so vivid I was ...

Dani, I think I've said this before but I'll say it again! I really admire your way of writing so much different kinds of poetry! This one was really good, ...

Are you serious! This is the first poem you've written!? Well then this is really, very good. You've got a good structure, you used punctuation, made a good flow and ...

Gosh, this is sooo, sooo sad and tragic and heartwrenching! The simplicity of it wasn't a bad thing in this case, if it had been a child who was thinking ...

This is a really good, powerful, touching poem! I like the message and the amazing descriptions. All though I think you need to work on the grammar for the sake ...

Hii, I really liked this storybook and I like my character and all, it's just that I'm caught up in too much and school just started so unfortuantly I'm gonna ...

Aodán - Forest nearby Asyra "Isranda!" Aodán snarled and positioned himself between his old friend, and Keira. Ulma had changed, Aodán still sensed bravery and recklessness but she had lost ...

This is funny, Kamas just said this was his 350:th review... and guess what, it's mine too! So, let's get to it! I want to begin with saying that even ...