Demonangel42

I like how you kept changing the rhyming pattern of you poem. I also liked how you described a friendship as a war, i can really relate.

I agree it should have been longer and have something that other people wouldn't put down. But i liked it.

Yeah, i'm new and i'm bored. ummm, i am in the midst of writitng a fantasy novel but i mostly write poetry. i'v submitted a couple of pieces already but ...

The Pen is Mightier then the Sword With your fist You strike a blow Upon man's cheek To let blood flow No brain to converse No heart to listen All ...

Doubtfulness When you have a loving heart, you have every right to sing. To laugh to play to have some fun you can do anything. When you have a broken ...

"She's My Angel" She's is my angel, sweet and malevolent. She is as beautiful, as she is intelligent. I claim to guard her, from harm of all kind. To never ...