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Demeter

Demeter

  • Lounge, The Re: The March Review Day Check-In Thread

    10 so far! I feel like I'm on fire. I haven't reviewed as much in a long time!

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: To the Sea

    Hi, Emmer! I liked this a lot as well. I think you write beautifully without trying to be too artsy or fancy. Simplicity is pretty. I especially liked this bit: ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: La noche

    Hi, Upile! Nice to meet you. I'm Demeter. :) You know what, I liked this a lot. (And I did some research and found out the "la noche" means night!) ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The List, #071: The True You

    Chiko! Wow, why haven't I read your stuff before? Or have I? If I have, it must have been quite a long time ago. I think you're a really good ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Joys of Being a Writer

    Hey Marrzi! Haha! I'm pretty sure that we can all recognise a bit of ourselves in this poem. This was quite funny and described perfectly what writing at its best ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Breaking

    Hi, Geekchic! Nice to meet you. I like everything that has a this kind of message -- being strong, not caring about what others think, and so on. It's really ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: Stalker Syndrome

    Hi, dregymayfield! I decided to come and take a look, since I saw this only had one review so far. This sounds like an intense rock song, so I'm imagining ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Colt .45

    Hi, Tommy! I think this could be quite a powerful poem with some tweaking. Some things that disturbed me as a reader were your nonchalant usage of punctuation and a ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Spring

    Hi, Kitten! Nice to meet you, I'm Demeter. :) This is a sweet poem that makes me miss spring time -- luckily it's almost here! However, the title is "Spring" ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Lukewarm, Chapter 1. (EDITED)

    Hi, Cspr! I decided to come and take a look at this, since a) it didn't have any reviews yet and b) the title is one of my favourite words ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Nymph

    Hey, Dani! So, I like haiku poems a lot a lot, and I was excited to see that these were haiku! I've also done what you did here, which is ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Official Polls Re: What makes you pick up a book?

    Most people have a reason why they read a certain book. What makes you pick up a book you haven't read before? How do you choose it?

    Mar 26, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: What got you started in writing?

    I'm not actually sure. I've written for as long as I can remember. I don't remember ever thinking "hey, I think I want to write a story"... I just wrote ...

    Mar 26, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: The March Review Day Check-In Thread

    Check!

    Mar 26, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: What are you listening to right now?

    I'm Yours by Jason Mraz.

    Mar 25, 2011


You unlock this door with the key of imagination. Beyond it is another dimension: a dimension of sound, a dimension of sight, a dimension of mind. You’re moving into a land of both shadow and substance, of things and ideas. You’ve just crossed over into… the Twilight Zone.
— Rod Serling