Demeter

Here's looking at you, kids.

Hey, Carbon! I'm here as you requested. :) The shambler gently rocked, almost lulling me to sleep, but the knowledge of my arrival to the cliff town of Spondekai kept ...

Hi Ethan, welcome to YWS! Haha, I'm a bit quiet too... but the best people are, right? haha. Anyway, I hope you'll like it here, and just drop me a ...

Hi, Twist! Welcome to YWS :) Obviously you already figured out the avatar thing, haha. Good for you! If you have any more questions, just message me -- I'll be ...

Hi Turtle! (Can I call you Turtle?) Do you happen to like Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles at all? I just wondered, since I got the impression you like turtles ;) ...

Hi, Danny! I decided to come in and take a look, since I love haikus a lot. Although I'm never sure what the plural is. Apparently, it's just haiku, but ...

Hey alfredsymon, Wow, errr, you are amazing. xD Okay, so maybe all the lines and haikus didn't sound as tight as the others, but I was truly entertained by this ...

To be honest, Gal... I thought you were a bit more mature than this. I understand it if you're having a hard time being a JM -- it is a ...

Yay! And 50?! Lavender scares me... But that's amazing!

Hi, Rose! I think this has the potential to be a great light-hearted poem, but I think you should make it rhyme more! I liked that there was a trace ...

You're a machine, Cause!

Hi again, Upile! I've read some Pablo Neruda, too. I love his "Book of Questions". I think this was a nice tribute to him -- this is quite intense and ...

Hey, Inkwell -- you are a young, yearning poet! ;) I think this is pretty cool! I wasn't expecting something like this, either, when I saw the title, so I ...

Hi, Dream! I think you should make the whole poem rhyme :) Not that I don't like your current structure, I just think it would be a nice touch. Rhymes ...

Hi, ultraviolet! Well done on the rhythm -- it was nearly flawless throughout the poem, which alone made this quite an enjoyable read. I think the only - at least ...