Demeter

Jojo! Ah, I loved this - such a genuine, heartfelt story. I'm very glad you wrote it. I really like the way you told the story - there's just the ...

Hi, Leeanna! At first when I was reading this I thought "Hmm, I've seen poems like this many times before", but when I got further I realised that this was ...

Hi, Anwesha! It's been a while since I reviewed poetry... I feel like I'm getting rusty. Outside my window it rained, While inside my heart it pained. I don't think ...

Hi, VuzzyCat! Aw, this was sweet. You obviously have a way with words. I kind of liked how we're thrown in the middle of the scene, without unnecessary explanations about ...

Hi, Crimson! What you have here is quite sweet. The ending and all the pondering could be very powerful, if I only knew more about the characters. That's a big ...

Chrome is secretly the eighth horcrux. I liked that, even though I failed to see the logic. xD

Hi there, Ben! Nitpicks: “They say she’s cursed, that Ms Moore,” the taxi driver groaned. Hmm, it might be just me, but I think it should be "Miss", since this ...

Hi, Empress! This seems like an interesting story, judging by the description and the "prologue" of the prologue (before all the dialogue starts)! I really liked the first eight "paragraphs" ...

Hi, Paul! You know what, when I was reading this, I forgot that I was reading a work posted on a young writers' site by an aspiring author. This seems ...

Fingerless gloves only make me think of Ash. o_o I wouldn't say I have any rituals. Probably get a bottle of water next to me or something, but other than ...

Okay, thanks Rosey and Nate! :)

For Charlie, a WHOLE blueberry pie!

Time of Incident (include your timezone): Has happened several times, not depending on the time of the day. This has been going on for maybe a month or so. Browser: ...

Hi Sarah! I hope you forgive me for not doing much other than nitpicks today. :) Tremulously the ground shakes. This sounds a bit Yoda-y... so maybe just move the ...

I still don't get it. D: No but really, amazin'! (Get it... 'cause that's like Amazon... haha...)