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Demeter

  • Lyric Poetry Re: Weakness?

    Hi, Cyrus! Wow, I really like rhyming poetry if it's done well, and you did it really well! I'm locked in you- I am aware- trapped inside your captive stare. ...

    Jan 3, 2012
  • Lounge, The Re: The Great Review Challenge of 2012

    We staff members don't mean to brag, but - well, yes, we do.

    Jan 3, 2012
  • Lounge, The Re: Team Staff

    Staff's on the scene just in case you didn't know it.

    Jan 3, 2012
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Darkness

    Hi there, Gloss! What you did rather well was capture the speaker's feelings into this poem. However, I think you were a bit too straight-forward with it and didn't really ...

    Jan 3, 2012
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Work In Progress?

    Hi there, Drawers! I think it's really interesting you have recurring dreams. Dreams are actually wonderful sources for stories and ideas (hey, ask Stephenie Meyer >.>) so I'm glad you ...

    Jan 3, 2012
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: She the Skeleton

    Hi, Lav-Lav! This was rather intense. I really liked the beginning; it was creepy, which I like, and sucked me in, which is obviously what you want. I think that ...

    Jan 3, 2012
  • Romantic Novels Re: A Love Unheard Of: Chapter 1: Unusual Friends

    Hello Jalmoc! You posted on my WRFF ages ago and I'm so sorry for not dropping by sooner. I've really been such a rusty reviewer these past months. Micah woke ...

    Jan 3, 2012
  • Lounge, The Re: Team Staff

    Stop, collaborate, and listen. 8) I'd like it if I could...

    Jan 3, 2012
  • Lounge, The Re: Team Staff

    Remember guys, anything less than the best is a felony.

    Jan 2, 2012
  • Questions and Answers Re: works

    What kind of a problem? :)

    Jan 2, 2012
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello, and greetings.

    Hi there! Welcome to YWS! I want to call you Maleficent because she's one of the best Disney villains. xD I'm not implying you're a villain, though! Anything but, since ...

    Jan 2, 2012
  • Writing Activities Re: Rate the first sentence above you

    I love this. That one little sentence already has the quirky feeling that I love in a story (I like to call that Roald Dahlian xD) and it would definitely ...

    Jan 2, 2012
  • Writing Activities Re: Unique ways to creat names.

    I love maps as pretty posters, but they're also really good at giving me names. I keep this list of names that I like, and I've only ever used a ...

    Jan 2, 2012
  • Grammar & Research Re: Apostrophe's

    I know it's been almost a year since the last post, but I just wanted to say that Jagged is right. xD You can use both. I used to only ...

    Jan 2, 2012
  • Information Desk Archive Re: YWS: Apollo Updates Thread

    Yay! The T. S. Eliot quote I loved last year is back :)

    Jan 2, 2012


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